지피티가 첨삭해준 기초영어문장

1. 친구와 공원에 간 이야기

I went to the park with my friend on the weekend. The weather was warm and nice. We walked around and drank coffee. Some people were riding bicycles, and others were playing with their dogs in the park. I had a great time.

2. 가족과 식당에 간 이야기

I went to a restaurant yesterday with my family. I ate pizza and spaghetti for dinner. The food was great. There were many people in the restaurant, but the atmosphere was nice. I had a great time overall.

3. 친구들과 영화관에 간 이야기

I went to the movie theater with my friends last weekend. I watched a popular action movie, and it was very interesting. After the movie was over, we spent some time talking about it at a nearby café. My friends said the action scenes were amazing, and I agreed with them. However, I thought the ending was a bit disappointing. Still, I had a great time overall.

4. 지난달에 여행 간 이야기

I went on a trip last month. The place I visited had beautiful nature, and the air was fresh and peaceful. I spent my time hiking and walking around. I tried delicious local food there, and one dish especially impressed me. I took many pictures and made great memories. After returning to my daily life, I started missing that place.


아래는 네 개 문장을 구어체로 수정한 예시야:

1. 친구와 공원에 간 이야기 (구어체)

I went to the park with my friend over the weekend. The weather was really nice and warm. We strolled around and grabbed some coffee. I saw people riding bikes and playing with their dogs. Overall, I had an awesome time.

2. 가족과 식당에 간 이야기 (구어체)

I went to a restaurant with my family yesterday. We had pizza and spaghetti for dinner, and the food was amazing. The place was pretty busy, but the vibe was really chill. I had a great time overall.

3. 친구들과 영화관에 간 이야기 (구어체)

I went to the movies with my friends last weekend. We watched a popular action flick, and it was pretty interesting. After the movie, we hung out at a nearby café and talked about it. My friends raved about the action scenes, and I agreed—even though I thought the ending was a bit of a letdown. Still, I had a great time overall.

4. 지난달에 여행 간 이야기 (구어체)

I went on a trip last month. The place I visited was super scenic—the nature was beautiful, and the air was really fresh and peaceful. I spent my time hiking and just wandering around. I tried some amazing local food, and one dish really stood out to me. I snapped a bunch of photos and made some awesome memories. Once I got back to my daily routine, I started missing that place.

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