지피티가 첨삭해준 기초영어문장2

아래에 네 개의 수정 예시를 한 번에 모아서 정리했어:

1. 보통 난이도 (운동하는 아침 이야기)

I woke up early in the morning and exercised. The weather was cool, which made it ideal for working out. I listened to music while jogging. After exercising, I had a light breakfast. I started my day feeling refreshed.

아래는 1번 운동하는 아침 이야기를 더 자연스러운 구어체로 수정한 예시야:

I woke up early this morning and went for a workout. The weather was cool, so it was perfect for exercising. I listened to some music while jogging around. After my workout, I grabbed a light breakfast. I started my day feeling really refreshed.

이렇게 구어체로 표현하면 대화할 때 훨씬 자연스럽게 들릴 거야. 추가적으로 수정할 부분이나 궁금한 점 있으면 말해줘!

2. 보통 난이도 (집에서 보낸 하루 이야기)

Yesterday, I spent the entire day at home. I relaxed by watching a movie or reading some books. One movie, in particular, was very touching. In the evening, I cooked dinner for myself. It was a peaceful day at home

구어체
Yesterday, I spent the whole day just hanging out at home. I chilled by watching a movie and reading some books. One movie in particular really moved me. Later, I cooked dinner for myself. It was a pretty laid-back day at home.



3. 보통 난이도 (친구에게 받은 선물 이야기)

I received a present from my friend. It was exactly what I had wanted. It was very meaningful because my friend chose it especially for me. I felt grateful for the thoughtful gift, and it made my day.

구어체

I got a present from my friend, and it was exactly what I wanted. It really meant a lot because my friend picked it out just for me. I felt super grateful for that thoughtful gift—it totally made my day.


4. 어려운 난이도 (새로운 취미 시작 이야기)

I have started a new hobby recently. At first, it was difficult, but I’m getting used to it. I noticed that my skills improved as I continued practicing. Through this hobby, I relieved my stress and met new people. I want to keep learning steadily and improve further in the future.

구어체

I recently picked up a new hobby. At first, it was pretty challenging, but I’m getting the hang of it. I can already see my skills improving as I practice more. This hobby has been a great way to de-stress and meet some cool new people. I plan to keep learning and get even better as time goes on.

이제 이 네 개의 예시를 복사해서 참고하면 돼. 추가 질문이나 도움이 필요하면 언제든지 말해줘!



너무 못해서 매번 좌절 ㅎㅎㅎㅜ